J. Kelly Robison
And the list goes on…(Try “etc.” but spell it right)
[And] don’t forget (do not forget) (Don’t talk to the reader. And don’t suggest that the reader remember, either.)
Directed toward [a more] (What do you mean here? “Written for”--?)
Due to the fact that (just use “because” or “since” and save four words)
Inform on (nonstandard form. Use “inform about”)
Just to name a few (Try “for example”)
Not to mention (Then don’t mention it. J
Nowadays (in any form, including, “Today’s worldToday’s society, Society of today)
Straight forward (Just say ‘direct’ or what you really mean)
Such as (Try “for example”)
(To) That of – Remove. Arin’s cabin is comparable to {that of} Thoreau’s.
When it comes to…--Wordy. Use “with” or something less vague.
Whether it be….(Rephrase entirely.)
Try to avoid writing that an author “talks (about) something. Use a more specific verb like “writes” or “mentions” or “clarifies,” etc.
Effect: Noun or Verb (signifying physical change)
The effect she has on him is amazing.
The sun effects the skin severely after too much exposure.
Affect: Only a verb –used to signify emotional changes.
That movie really affects me; I cry every time I see it.
If you’re still confused, go with effect; it’s used much more often.